Journal 2
Simon: Simon is a quite boy who is quite shy and looks down on the younger boys and looks after them. Simone whines when he doesn’t like the things are being done. He starts to say ya c’mon let’s rest for a while.
I don’t understand why are we running back down from the mountain to the “camp” why? Suddenly there was a high pitched squealing. We started to run towards it, it was a piglet stuck in some high creepers. They ran towards it to grab it and kill it. Jack pulls out his knife and as soon as he’s about to strike he is stunned. I kept thinking c’mon stab it already c’mon kill it. The pig frees from Ralph’s and my grasp. We don’t say anything after it gets away. Jack says “I was looking for a place to kill it.” Jack slams his knife into a tree and says “Next time I’ll kill it next time.”
We start to run towards camp again with jack trailing behind us sulking about what happened. When we get back to camp we tell everyone that it’s an island. We also mentioned about the animals and the mountain, and jack again gets mad about the pig. Soon jack brings up to make a fire and everyone agrees with him. As soon as I know it I hear piggy complaining about why the should have listened to him, jack telling him to shut up and everyone else stunned that the entire forest caught on fire!!!
2 comments:
it was pretty good except you had atleast one mistake.
There was one mistake where you put simone instead of simon, also you talk more about the first chapter instead of the second chapter. So ya fix those and you'll be fine.
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