Boring
Jack: Jack has become more and more self-centered and meaner to other people since the last time. He goes on and on about how next time he will kill the pig and how he thinks he’s better then the rules, that he shouldn’t follow the rules. Jack is constantly being mean to piggy and thinks piggy is the most annoying fat boy he has ever met.
Why are we having this meeting all they are just a bunch of sissy’s who are scared of some “beastie” I think we should just let them roam free and that’s it. We could also but them in a certain area and not let them out of the place.
Huh what’s with all these rules now? Why is he getting to be so bossy? He should just shut up and drop that conch thing too. If I was in charge I would lay out some basic rules such as break the rules you miss a meal, so on. I would also lay out boundaries to keep them contained.
Why can’t I be leader, I’m the most mature and responsible one. I’m the one that can supply for the tribe. I’m the one with the sense of rules, and law. I’m probably more civilized then any of the others, plus I’m stronger and tougher. Id like to see Ralph and me get into a fight I bet 1000 bucks I would win.
6 comments:
I like how to start out like a narrator but then you go into the perspective of Jack. I also like how you did a blanket like overview of the story so far.
well i dont like it that you made it so like someone else was trelling the story in the beginning and its supposed to be from his perspective so yeah. Make it like that way instead.
I thought that it was pretty good, it was a little confusing at first but you fixed that, i liked how you thought that overall you were better than anyone in the group.
I also liked that you started narrating then went to the perspective of Jack. I like how you discribe Jack's personality.
Jack's arrogance has definitely been captured in your entry Tad. I also like how you have made it so that Jack makes it seem like everything is not his fault.
I like how you wrote a paragraph about the charater before you showed their perspective. It was really different then others. You really showed how Jack felt about the assembly.
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